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Brony Poetry Thread

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  • Ohai! Sorry for the late reply lol da internets is finally working again :D anyways, no I actually forgot to make a title XD. I remember I was feeling pretty depressed so I decided to write that >.> whenever I get sad, I find that writing about it actually makes me feel better :3 also, I like your haiku :D

    U KNOW MEEEEE

  • Thank you very much.

     

    Fruit Basket

     

    Layers burn away                                            

                                                                                                Harsh Breathing

    My skin is falling off and I pray

                                                                                                The intense hunger seething

    My legs to my head, I am devoured.

                                                                                                Satisfied chewing.

    I can't think much more I give up, I'm a coward.

                                                                                                 Yum! That was a tasty banana!

  • Wrote this for school today.  Kinda meh.

    Unity on the Fly

    They can take away our buildings,

    throw our economy in the trash,

    demolish our sense of safety,

    and leave us confused, in a flash.

    They can take away our families,

    and our friends, one by one.

    They can take wives and husbands,

    they can erase a daughter or son.

    But one thing that they can’t steal,

    no matter how hard they try,

    is our undying sense of companionship,

    our “unity on the fly.”

    We’ll unite under one banner,

    of red, white and blue,

    to show them they’ll have to try harder,

    to break us through and through.

    Obviously, inspired by 9/11

  • hitchhikerwaffle:

    Thank you very much.

     

    Fruit Basket

     

    Layers burn away                                            

                                                                                                Harsh Breathing

    My skin is falling off and I pray

                                                                                                The intense hunger seething

    My legs to my head, I am devoured.

                                                                                                Satisfied chewing.

    I can't think much more I give up, I'm a coward.

                                                                                                 Yum! That was a tasty banana!

    Let me guess: Duel layered poem where one side is the is the fruit and the other side is the human? I'm getting a conflicting emotion here XD

     

     

     

     

  • Abade:

     

    How many hours

    Must I wait?

    To see you again,

    To share our brief love to dance yet again?

    Out times would meet and leave me afire

    The coolness of my heart, erased for awhile.

     

    And as we meet in the cool fire

    Out lovers dance for all to see

    We embrace in the Twilight

    and I weep in the Dark

    Fading back into the void.

     

    The cold returned

    My heart barley glows

    our audience left in rapture

    Our eternal Abade to see

     

    How many hours

    Must I wait?

    To see you again,

    The Abade of my Sun.

     

    I decided to use a style that would sound like a song if said aloud. I tried another attempt to do one like this, but it just wouldn't come out to something I liked.

    With this poem, I also have a little thing I'll be doing in appreciation. I'll be randomly picking poems to record to. sadly, I cannot do every poem because many of such are more of a visual experience than verbal. I've started off with Cheese's unnamed poem:

    http://soundcloud.com/undertakeradrian/we-six-friends

    I'll either just update this post, or put them in the original post instead of a new post for each one I do.

     

     

     

     

  • I tried to click the link and it didn't work.

     

     

    Imagine how is touch the spy.

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  • Had it set to private, sorry. Fixed now.

     

     

     

  • Hey guys, did Fluttershy's Cheer. It's Cheery approved! Enjoy.   soundcloud.com/.../fluttershys-cheer

     

     

     

  • Undertaker Adrian:

    hitchhikerwaffle:

    Thank you very much.

     

    Fruit Basket

     

    Layers burn away                                            

                                                                                                Harsh Breathing

    My skin is falling off and I pray

                                                                                                The intense hunger seething

    My legs to my head, I am devoured.

                                                                                                Satisfied chewing.

    I can't think much more I give up, I'm a coward.

                                                                                                 Yum! That was a tasty banana!

    Let me guess: Duel layered poem where one side is the is the fruit and the other side is the human? I'm getting a conflicting emotion here XD

     

    Why thank you for noticing sir!!!! 

  • Here's my poem:

    You're a person of many talents, of this I know for sure. When my heart aches of solitude and worry, just you being there is the cure. Your presence illuminates my mind and dissolves all of my troubles.

    I may not be the best at keeping things interesting, but of my loyalty I hold truth. My actions may make you think twice about my ability to behave skillfully, but it's merely me being around you that makes me appear uncouth.

    Our beginnings are quite unorthodox, this I admit. Poniess had never crossed my mind when it came to commitment. Though you may believe there's not enough to keep us together, I just want you to let you know that my care for you will never be the lesser.

  • This is good man. This is really good.  

     

  • Nokjaw:

     

    Here's my poem:

    You're a person of many talents, of this I know for sure. When my heart aches of solitude and worry, just you being there is the cure. Your presence illuminates my mind and dissolves all of my troubles.

    I may not be the best at keeping things interesting, but of my loyalty I hold truth. My actions may make you think twice about my ability to behave skillfully, but it's merely me being around you that makes me appear uncouth.

    Our beginnings are quite unorthodox, this I admit. Poniess had never crossed my mind when it came to commitment. Though you may believe there's not enough to keep us together, I just want you to let you know that my care for you will never be the lesser.

     

    This is a great poem Nokjaw I'm sure she will love this. I do have a suggestion though. Your first stanza is great, love it. The words flow well when spoken aloud, but the flow is interupted in the second. Keep saying this aloud to try and get the perfect flow that will keep her attention throughout. If you're not already planning to, be sure to read this to her yourself. She'll love you more for that.

    Only other suggestion I might have is to find a different word besides "Uncouth". It's a bit dated, and might call too much attention to itself if she has to say it several times in her head.

    I wish you the best my friend.

     

     

     

  • Edit: 42 post. This post is the answer to life the universe and everything else..... Now if only we knew the question :P

     

    So, I haven't written anything in a long time. So while I was listening to Monster I came up with some lyrics that need music put to them obviously. Right now I have it as a cross between the riffs of Headstrong and the riffs of Monster by Skillet mixed with some original ideas. Too bad I can't play :P Tell me what you think.

    Die Die Die Die!

    Every thought everything I tried to hide

    Every hope of the, destruction of my life

    Let it all Let it all Let it all die

    I want to let go of everything and everyone I know

    Drown it out

    Shut it down

    Bring about a change of heart

    Can you hear me I'm not listening

    Down in my head let the darkness out

    Do you feel the smoke of my soul?

    Someone take a knife and kill the beast within

    I can't control it someone save me from my sin

    I want to let go of everything and everyone I know

    Drown it out

    Shut it down

    Bring about a change of heart

    Can you hear me, I'm not listening.

    Sound comes through my ears and the beast wants to go blind from the song

    Will you hear what I say even when I don't care?

    Why do you listen to me when I want to kill you.

    What if I will never change

    Will you still try to kill the demon inside of me?

    I want to let go of everything and everyone I know

    Drown it out

    Shut it down

    Bring about a change of heart

    Can you hear me, I'm not listening

    Take this bath and drown my soul

    The monster in me wants to take over

    What if I let it out

    Will you drown the evil

    Will you help me?

    Jesus I'm sorry for not listening

    I'm going deaf again

    I want to let go of everything and everyone I know

    I'm drowning and the beast within is coming out

    I tried to shut it down but the power came on

    I'm withering away I know you hear me God and I'm still not listening

    Please let me listen to you

    Before I go away

    Before I'm left with nothing but a monster in my place

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